Agent: Your writing is solid, but the setting didn't quite work for me. It might work if you placed it somewhere dry. Maybe try resetting it in the Mojave Desert, maybe Needles, California in a truck stop under a bill board for grape crush.
Writer: B-but it's a surfing story.
Agent: Right. Keep the sand. The sand works.
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